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口语 · 2026-07-11

一霏同学的课程学习报告

IELTS 口语模考:Part 1 短问短答、Part 2 两分钟展开、Part 3 观点讨论;话题包括家乡、历史、太空、App、社区、宠物、风景和长期目标。

学员:一霏同学 老师:滕达老师 课型:模考 主题:IELTS Speaking mock test: hometown, history, space, apps, neighborhood, pets, views, long-term goals

课后复习模块

练过的材料

  • Part 1 - Could you tell me your full name please?(speaking_part1_question):开场身份确认
  • Part 1 - Are you a student or do you work?(speaking_part1_question):学生身份与专业
  • Part 1 - Where are you from?(speaking_part1_question):家乡话题
  • Part 1 - What do you like the most about your city?(speaking_part1_question):家乡优点
  • Part 1 - Do you plan to live there in the future?(speaking_part1_question):未来居住计划
  • Part 1 - Did you like history when you were young?(speaking_part1_question):历史话题

词汇和表达

  • landscape:风景;自然景观
  • stunning:非常美的;令人惊艳的
  • science fiction movie:科幻电影
  • second-hand online shopping app:二手网购 App
  • Part 1 介绍家乡位置。;我来自……,它离……很远。
  • 回答 what do you like the most about your city。;我最喜欢我城市的一点是……

纠错重点

  • {"rawOrIssue": "There's many mountains and grasses.", "correctedOrAdvice": "There are many mountains and areas of grassland.", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "many 后面通常接复数;there are 对应复数名词。", "sourceEvidence": "There's many mountains and grasses"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "the air there Are also very fresh", "correctedOrAdvice": "The air there is also very fresh.", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "air 是不可数名词,用 is。", "sourceEvidence": "the air there Are also very fresh"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "there's no much Entertaining activities", "correctedOrAdvice": "There are not many entertainment activities.", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "activities 是复数,用 many;entertainment 作名词修饰 activities。", "sourceEvidence": "there's no much Ah Entertaining activities"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "people... don't really cares", "correctedOrAdvice": "people don't really care", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "people 是复数概念,助动词 don't 后用动词原形。", "sourceEvidence": "they don't really cares"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "Lots of knowledge about space I have are learned from...", "correctedOrAdvice": "Most of what I know about space comes from science fiction movies or novels.", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "knowledge 不可数;可改成 what I know 更自然。", "sourceEvidence": "Lots of knowledge about space I have are Learned from science fiction movies or novels"}
  • {"rawOrIssue": "a lots of friends use to recommend it to me", "correctedOrAdvice": "A lot of friends recommended it to me.", "reasonOrMemoryTip": "a lot of 不加 s;过去发生的推荐用 recommended。", "sourceEvidence": "A lots of friends use to recommend it to me"}

可回读产出

  • 本节课口语段子改进版:{"part": "Part 1", "question": "Could you tell me your full name please?", "answer": "My full name is Fang Yifei, but you can call me Fei.", "pairedWithCueCardId": ""};{"part": "Part 1", "question": "Are you a student or do you work?", "answer": "I am currently a student, and I major in philosophy at university.", "pairedWithCueCardId": ""}

课后动作

  • 复盘两套 Part 2 答案:闲鱼 App 和成为哲学家的长期目标,各自练到 1分40秒-2分钟,录音时保持完整结构。
  • 整理并背熟本节课 10 个高频纠错点:children、information、air、there are、one hour、noisy、live、a permanent place to live、major in、an ambition。
  • Part 3 每题至少补一个具体例子,尤其是 App 监管、目标重要性和野心优缺点。

一、课堂推进时间轴

1

录音部分 A - Part 1 身份与家乡

课堂推进:老师先按真实口语考试流程询问姓名、学习状态和家乡。学生介绍自己是哲学专业学生,并描述家乡的自然风景、就业机会和娱乐活动不足。

老师处理:老师以 examiner 方式连续提问:姓名、是否学生、来自哪里、最喜欢城市什么、未来是否计划住在那里。

学生原始输出:My full name is Fang Yi Fei but you can call me Fei; Currently I'm a student and major in philosophy in my university; I am from Ting Hai... it has stunning land landscapes; it's not very civilized... There's many mountains and grasses... the air there Are also very fresh; Not really... it's very hard for young people to find a good job... there's no much Entertaining activities.

复习抓手:Part 1 要用短问短答,直接回答问题后补 1-2 个原因。;描述家乡时可用 landscape(风景)、fresh air(新鲜空气)、job opportunities(工作机会)等具体表达。;注意 there is/there are 和名词单复数。

2

录音部分 A - Part 1 History

课堂推进:老师转入 history(历史)话题,学生说明小时候不喜欢历史,因为课堂强调背时间、人名和地点;后来因为哲学学习需要,读过某位思想家的历史背景。

老师处理:老师追问是否小时候喜欢历史、上次读历史是什么时候、为什么很多人觉得历史无聊。

学生原始输出:not really... our teacher always ask us to remember those Time Those names And those places; the last time I read about history was Last month... I need to know about a particular writer's history... so that I can learn... his thought better; history is not a part of their lives... too far away from their ordinary life.

复习抓手:解释不喜欢某学科时,可以给出课堂体验和个人感受。;history background(历史背景)可以和专业学习连接起来。;注意 people 后面的动词形式:people care,不说 people cares。

3

录音部分 A - Part 1 Space

课堂推进:老师继续问 space(太空)相关问题。学生说自己喜欢科幻电影,也愿意将来去太空,因为好奇太空环境和外星生命。

老师处理:老师提问是否喜欢科幻电影、未来是否想去外太空、是否在学校学过太空和星星。

学生原始输出:Yes, I really like science fiction movies... Project Hail Mary... very interesting; yes if I have chance I would go to the Space... I am a really Curious person... Is there alien or something like that; I just learn some very fundamental knowledge... Lots of knowledge about space I have are Learned from science fiction movies or novels.

复习抓手:science fiction movies(科幻电影)和 outer space(外太空)可作为太空话题核心词。;回答是否想去太空时,可以用 curiosity(好奇心)支撑理由。;注意 knowledge 是不可数名词,不能直接说 lots of knowledge are。

4

录音部分 A - Part 2 常用 App

课堂推进:老师给出 Part 2 cue card,要求描述一个常用的电脑程序或手机 App。学生选择闲鱼,说明它是二手网购 App,自己通过朋友推荐和社交媒体了解,经常浏览,需要时购买。

老师处理:老师给出一分钟准备和两分钟作答要求,并在两分钟结束时打断进入 Part 3。

学生原始输出:today I want to talk About An app on my phone that I used a lot... a second hand online shopping app... called Xian Yu... I know it from Many sources like A lots of friends use to recommend it to me... I always scroll through it Like On Weekly basis... I only buy things From It When I am In Need... I bought a Yellow Rainbow's rainbow boots... preparing for A music festival... weather forecast said There would be a rain.

复习抓手:Part 2 要覆盖 what it is、how often、how you use it、how you found it、how you feel about it。;second-hand online shopping app(二手网购 App)是清晰分类。;用具体购买经历可以让答案更真实。

5

录音部分 A - Part 3 Apps

课堂推进:老师围绕 App 继续进行 Part 3 讨论。学生讨论了热门 App、父母是否应该限制孩子使用、年轻人是否越来越依赖 App,以及政府是否应该监管 App。

老师处理:老师连续提出四个讨论问题,并引导学生从个人使用扩展到社会、家庭和政府监管层面。

学生原始输出:Online Shopping apps... Social Media... TikTok... good Way to Escape From Reality; parents Should Limit their Childrens Use... make some Contract... If You finish your homework today before nine o'clock Then you can play Your Phone For About One Hours; young people... rely On Their Phones To Work... leaders will always Give some informations Through the WeChat; government should regulate... Illegal app or illegal information... shouldn't be too extreme Otherwise People will lose their freedom.

复习抓手:Part 3 要回答观点并解释 why/how。;regulate(监管)、ban(禁止)、freedom(自由)、public advice(公众意见)是 App 监管话题关键词。;注意 children 是复数,不说 childrens;information 不可数,不说 informations。

6

录音部分 B - Part 1 Neighborhood

课堂推进:第二段模考从 neighborhood(社区)开始。学生描述自己居住的社区比较吵,因为周围有很多孩子;她也提到邻居之间大多只是电梯里打招呼。

老师处理:老师询问社区安静还是吵、是否有名人住在附近、是否认识邻居。

学生原始输出:It's kind of noising like there's a lot of children leave around me... I can always be interrupted by Like pirates yowling to their children; there is not much famous people live in my Neighborhood... a famous English teacher, lived next to me; Many neighbors of mine we just met several times when we are take the elevator... we just say hello.

复习抓手:neighborhood(社区)话题要描述环境、人和邻里关系。;quiet/noisy 是直接回答社区特点的关键词。;注意 noisy,不说 noising;live around me,不说 leave around me。

7

录音部分 B - Part 1 Pets

课堂推进:老师进入 pets(宠物)话题。学生说中国越来越多人养宠物,尤其是猫等小型安静宠物;她自己小时候养过兔子,现在家里和老家都有猫,但因为居住不稳定,暂时不确定是否会养更多宠物。

老师处理:老师询问中国是否很多人养宠物、学生是否养过宠物、未来是否想养更多宠物。

学生原始输出:there is more and more people, keep Keeping pets... especially Those small pets And quiet pets Like cat; I used to have two rabbits... I also have a Cat in my hometown... I Also have another cat; I don't have an permanent leave Place Right Now... maybe it's Not Very Responsible If I keep a lot of pets right now.

复习抓手:pet companion(宠物陪伴)可以连接现代公寓生活。;回答未来计划时,可以用 responsible(负责任的)解释为什么暂时不做。;注意 a permanent place to live,不说 an permanent leave Place。

8

录音部分 B - Part 1 Views

课堂推进:老师询问 views(风景)相关问题。学生说自己喜欢拍风景照,因为小时候生活在自然景观丰富的地方,也受到父母拍照习惯影响;她能欣赏城市建筑和乡村自然风景。

老师处理:老师问是否喜欢拍不同风景、偏好城市景观还是乡村景观。

学生原始输出:I really like taking pictures... I used to live in a province where There is a lot of stunning landscapes... my parents Really Like To Take Photos So They Give Me Their Camera; I can Appreciate both of them... Beautiful buildings in Urban Areas... Humans creativity and originality... Natural landscapes in rural area... refreshing and relaxing.

复习抓手:views(风景)、urban areas(城市地区)、rural areas(乡村地区)要区分。;可以把城市建筑和人类创造力联系起来。;描述自然风景可用 refreshing and relaxing(清爽放松)。

9

录音部分 B - Part 2 长期目标

课堂推进:第二个 Part 2 题目是描述一个长期目标或抱负。学生讲到自己想成为哲学家,这个目标从高中开始,目前正在学习哲学、写论文、读论文,并准备申请研究生项目。

老师处理:老师给出 cue card 和考试流程,要求学生说明目标、持续时间、如何实现以及为什么重要。

学生原始输出:I always have an ambitions... to be a philosopher... I have this Long Term Goal Since I was in high school; I Really Like To Ask Why Questions... Basic Rules Of The University; right now I majoring Philosophy... write A lot of papers and take a Lot of courses; I need to pursue a PhD Degree... preparing my application for postgraduate program... read a lot of papers and reconstruct the argument from them.

复习抓手:Part 2 长期目标题要讲清楚目标来源、当前行动和未来步骤。;philosopher(哲学家)、academic training(学术训练)、postgraduate program(研究生项目)是本题核心词。;注意 ambition 可数时用 an ambition,复数用 ambitions;major in philosophy。

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录音部分 B - Part 3 Goals and ambition

课堂推进:最后老师围绕 goals and ambition(目标和抱负)进行 Part 3 讨论。学生认为孩子有目标很重要,因为目标能提供方向并帮助准备机会;她也分析了野心的优缺点、团队中是否需要有野心的人,以及当代人是否比过去更有野心。

老师处理:老师提出四个讨论题,并在结尾评价这次内容偏少。

学生原始输出:if you don't have A goal Its Very Likely that you would Waste Your Time... a Goal is like a purpose or a destination; it can Give You Direction... But... If You Are Too Ambitious... it would make you feel anxious or nervous; working In A team needs a Lot Of Different Persons... need persons That are really focus on Right now; people are less ambitious than Past... people Now have too much stress And responsibility... many people just want To Relax.

老师示范 / 修改方向:老师课后说:This time too 少了。

复习抓手:Part 3 讨论题要用观点 + 原因 + 例子扩展。;ambitious(有抱负的)、realistic goal(现实目标)、sense of direction(方向感)是目标话题常用表达。;老师指出这次回答内容偏少,后续需要扩展论证。

二、本节课亮点表现

一霏同学完成了两套口语模考流程,覆盖 Part 1、Part 2 和 Part 3。

Part 2 中能够用个人经历展开,例如闲鱼购买雨靴、想成为哲学家的长期目标。

Part 3 能表达观点并尝试解释原因,例如 App 监管、孩子使用手机限制、目标的重要性和野心的利弊。

需要继续加强语法准确度、名词单复数、不可数名词,以及 Part 3 的内容扩展。

三、本节课用了哪些材料

四、学生课堂输出

Part 1 - hometown

I am from Ting Hai It's a province that is far away from Beijing But it has stunning land landscapes.

Part 1 - hometown

There's many mountains and grasses. And also very beautiful blue sky Right? And the the air there Are also very fresh.

Part 1 - hometown

it's very hard for young people to find a good job and It's the city is actually kind of boring... there's no much Entertaining activities.

Part 1 - history

our teacher always ask us to remember those Time Those names And those places It's just very ah Boring and hard for me.

Part 1 - space

I would go to the Space in the future because am a really Curious person... Is there alien or something like that.

Part 2 - app

It is a second hand online shopping app And It's called Xian Yu... I always scroll through it Like On Weekly basis Whenever I have spare time But I only buy things From It When I am In Need.

Part 3 - apps

Parents can Make Deal with their children like... If You finish your homework today before nine o'clock Then you can play Your Phone For About One Hours.

Part 1 - neighborhood

It's kind of noising like there's a lot of children leave around me so uh I can always I can always ah be interrupted by Like pirates yowling to their children.

Part 1 - pets

I don't have an permanent leave Place Right Now so, I think maybe it's Not Very Responsible If I keep a lot of pets right now.

Part 2 - long-term goal

I always have an ambitions like I would Like To Achieve In the Future that is to be a philosopher... I need to pursue a PhD Degree... preparing my application for postgraduate program.

Part 3 - ambition

If You Are Too Ambitious if you set a goal That you cannot achieve according to your ability Then it would make you feel anxious or nervous.

五、本节课口语段子改进版

以下为按课堂已有内容整理的课后复习改进版,保留学生课堂立场和材料,不新增课堂外新观点。

Could you tell me your full name please?

答案朗读 1

My full name is Fang Yifei, but you can call me Fei.

Are you a student or do you work?

答案朗读 2

I am currently a student, and I major in philosophy at university.

Where are you from?

答案朗读 3

I am from Qinghai. It is far away from Beijing, and it has stunning natural landscapes.

What do you like the most about your city?

答案朗读 4

What I like most is the landscape. There are many mountains and large areas of grassland, and the sky is very blue. The air there is also very fresh.

Do you plan to live there in the future?

答案朗读 5

Not really. It is hard for young people to find good jobs there, and apart from the landscape, there are not many entertainment activities.

Did you like history when you were young?

答案朗读 6

Not really. We had history classes in high school, but I found them boring because we had to remember a lot of times, names and places.

When was the last time you read about history?

答案朗读 7

The last time was last month. I read about a writer's historical background because I study philosophy, and it helped me understand his thoughts better.

Why do you think a lot of people find history boring?

答案朗读 8

I think many people find history boring because they feel it is too far away from their daily lives. They may care more about what is happening now or what will happen in the future.

Do you like science fiction movies?

答案朗读 9

Yes, I really like science fiction movies. I watched a science fiction movie called Project Hail Mary last month, and I found it very interesting.

Do you want to go into outer space in the future?

答案朗读 10

Yes, if I had the chance, I would like to go into outer space. I am a curious person, and I want to know what the environment in space is like and whether aliens exist.

Have you ever learned about outer space and stars in school?

答案朗读 11

Not really. I only learned some basic knowledge about space in high school. Most of what I know about space comes from science fiction movies and novels.

Describe a computer program or app that you use very often.

答案朗读 12

I would like to talk about an app on my phone that I use quite often. It is a second-hand online shopping app called Xianyu, and it is very popular in China. I found out about it from several sources. Many of my friends recommended it to me, and I also saw a lot of posts about it on social media, so I decided to try it. I usually scroll through it on a weekly basis when I have spare time, but I only buy things from it when I really need something. For example, one time I bought a pair of yellow rain boots from Xianyu when I was preparing for a music festival. The weather forecast said it would rain, and if I bought them from an ordinary online shopping app like Taobao, it would take three to four days to arrive. I did not have enough time to wait, so I decided to buy them from Xianyu instead. Overall, I think it is a useful app because it helps people buy second-hand things more conveniently, especially when they need something quickly or want to save money.

What kind of apps are popular in your country?

答案朗读 13

I think apps related to daily life are very popular in my country, such as online shopping apps and social media apps. For example, people use WeChat, TikTok and other social media platforms because they have a lot of stress in daily life. When they scroll through social media, they can relax and forget their troubles for a while.

Do you think parents should limit their children's use of computer programs and cell phone apps? Why, and how?

答案朗读 14

Yes, I think parents should limit their children's use of apps because many children are too young to control themselves. Even adults sometimes find it hard to control their use of addictive apps. Parents can make a deal with their children, such as allowing them to use the phone for one hour after they finish their homework. They can also limit unsuitable content on their children's phones.

Do you think young people are more and more reliant on these programs and apps nowadays?

答案朗读 15

Yes, definitely. One reason is that social media is a convenient way for young people to relieve stress. Another reason is that people now need to rely on their phones for work or study. For example, leaders may send information or assign tasks through WeChat or work apps, and students also share information through their phones. If someone does not use these apps, they may lose a sense of belonging.

Do you think the government should regulate computer programs and apps? How should they do it?

答案朗读 16

Yes, I think the government should regulate apps, especially illegal apps or harmful information on apps. For example, some apps may pretend to be games but contain content that is bad for children or even adults. However, regulation should not be too extreme, because people may lose their freedom. The government can make laws about app use, listen to public advice before carrying out those laws, and set up departments to check app content.

What kind of neighborhood do you live in? Is it a quiet or noisy neighborhood?

答案朗读 17

It is kind of noisy because there are many children living around me. Sometimes I can be interrupted by parents shouting at their children, so it can be a little stressful.

Do you know of any famous people who live in your neighborhood?

答案朗读 18

There are not many famous people in my neighborhood. But if I have to say one, I know there is a famous English teacher living next to me. He used to work at New Oriental, and now he has started his own business.

Do you know your neighbors personally?

答案朗读 19

Not really. I have only met many of my neighbors several times in the elevator. Most of the time, we just say hello to each other and do not have long conversations.

Are there many people keeping pets in your country?

答案朗读 20

Yes, I think more and more people are keeping pets in my country, especially small and quiet pets like cats. Many people live in apartments, so they may not have enough space for big animals or animals that need a lot of room, like dogs.

Have you ever had a pet before?

答案朗读 21

Yes, I used to have many pets. I had two rabbits when I was a child, and I also have a cat in my hometown. Now my parents take care of it. I also have another cat where I live now.

Do you prefer to keep more pets in your future?

答案朗读 22

I really want to, because I often watch videos of cute pets on social media. But I am not sure whether I will keep more pets, because I do not have a permanent place to live right now. I think it may not be responsible to keep many pets at this stage.

Do you like taking pictures of different kinds of views?

答案朗读 23

Yes, I really like taking pictures. I used to live in a province with many stunning landscapes, so it was natural for me to appreciate beautiful scenery. My parents also like taking photos, and they gave me their camera, so I gradually developed this habit.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

答案朗读 24

I can appreciate both of them. In urban areas, I like beautiful buildings because I can see human creativity and originality in them. I also enjoy natural landscapes in rural areas because they make me feel refreshed and relaxed.

Talk about a long-term goal or ambition you would like to achieve.

答案朗读 25

I would like to talk about a long-term goal that I want to achieve in the future, which is to become a philosopher. I have had this goal since high school. At that time, I did not really understand what it meant to be a philosopher, but I found that I really liked asking why questions. I wanted to understand the basic rules of the universe and think about deeper questions. Because of this interest, I decided to study philosophy at university. Right now, I major in philosophy, write a lot of papers and take many courses related to this subject. However, I know that becoming a philosopher is not just about being smart. It requires serious academic training. For example, if I want to teach philosophy at university in the future, I need to have strong academic qualifications, and I probably need to pursue a PhD degree. So right now, I am preparing my application for a postgraduate program. I also need to read a lot of papers and reconstruct the arguments in them. This goal is important to me because philosophy is an area that I am genuinely interested in, and it gives me a clear direction for my future study and career.

Do you think it is important for children to have goals or ambitions?

答案朗读 26

Yes, definitely. I think it is important because if children do not have a goal, they may waste a lot of time. A goal is like a purpose or a destination. If they have a goal, they know where they need to go and how to prepare themselves. Also, when opportunities appear, they are more likely to be ready for them.

What are the pros and cons to be ambitious?

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Being ambitious has advantages and disadvantages. The main advantage is that it gives people a sense of direction, so they know what they need to do. However, if people are too ambitious or set a goal that is unrealistic according to their ability, they may feel anxious or nervous. If they work very hard but still cannot achieve the goal, they may feel upset.

Is it necessary to be ambitious when working in a team in a company?

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I do not think everyone in a team has to be ambitious. A team needs different kinds of people. It is important to have ambitious people because they can set a goal and help the team work towards it. But a team also needs people who focus on the present work and complete tasks step by step.

Are people in your country more ambitious nowadays compared to the past?

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I think people may be less ambitious than in the past, because many people now have too much stress and responsibility. Many of them just want to live a peaceful life and deal with the problems they have to face. After that, they may want to relax, spend time with family and friends, or pursue their hobbies. For them, being ambitious can become a burden or a source of stress.

六、本节课纠错

原句问题推荐表达记忆方法

七、课后任务

八、方法和词汇

方法总结

  • Part 1 短问短答:先直接回答,再补一个原因或例子。
  • Part 2 完整两分钟:题目要求的每个 bullet 都要覆盖。
  • Part 3 观点题:观点 + 原因 + 例子 + 适度让步。
  • 用个人真实经历支撑答案。

补充词汇

  • cue card:口语 Part 2 题卡;The cue card asks me to describe an app I use often.
  • on a weekly basis:每周;按周;I scroll through the app on a weekly basis.
  • in need:有需要时;I only buy things from it when I am in need.
  • sense of belonging:归属感;If people do not use these apps, they may lose a sense of belonging.
  • realistic:现实的;可实现的;An unrealistic goal can make people anxious.